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suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

0 posted 2003-10-09 12:36 PM

Your words are

Steel
Standing strong and proud
Designed to last forever
Wonders to behold

Comfort
A place to retreat
As the whole world fades away
Contentment abides

Lace
Threads of life woven
With use of delicate touch
In unique patterns

Heroic
No spandex or cape
But you fly, conquer evil
Make the world better

Droplets
Refreshing tired souls
Offering hope and cleansing
Sustaining through drought

Magic
Taking us elsewhere
On some journey you've prepared
Opening our eyes

Mine
You write for many
But some touch me so deeply
Become my treasures.

[This message has been edited by suthern (10-09-2003 12:36 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2003-10-09 12:45 PM

Likewise suthern~
to be treasured.

Steel
Comfort
Lace
Heroic
Droplets
Magic
Mine

I adore your poetry~

scorpio
Member Ascendant

since 2002-10-02

Posts 5178
right...there

2 posted 2003-10-09 12:48 PM

These words of yours speak volumes to me, Suthern..

believe in what your heart feels...

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-10-09 01:08 PM

Suthern, we often attract that which we ourselves are--the same thing goes for poetry! Your words are whereof you speak, Dear One.

Love, Light, & Literature!
EA

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

4 posted 2003-10-09 01:14 PM

suthern
These ae all treasures.

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

5 posted 2003-10-09 01:16 PM

Words are to be treasured. So is love. :-)

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

6 posted 2003-10-09 02:00 PM

Suthern, your words sparkle like glimmering gems, and exquisite pearls!

A whole hearted treasure trove that all can take delight in, and cherish always...

Richy

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-10-09 02:12 PM

Sweet Suthern Lady, I treasure your words
because I can feel the love with which you write them.

Heart hugs to you

Ethel

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2003-10-09 02:18 PM

DarlingLady~
This is sooooooooooooooooo good~

'Comfort
A place to retreat
As the whole world fades away
Contentment abides

Lace
Threads of life woven
With use of delicate touch
In unique patterns'

My favies~

But, adoring the 'spandex' lines~
*Huglets* girliefriend~
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
noles1@totcon.com

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member

since 2003-09-03

Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines

9 posted 2003-10-09 03:32 PM

Excellent, simply excellent. This a tribute to the very things that a writer tries to attain, and feels like both king of the world and its luckiest gambler, in those times when he succeeds --

As you have here.

~~J

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

10 posted 2003-10-09 03:34 PM

Ruth... we draw much from words..

you capture that well here..

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

11 posted 2003-10-09 03:59 PM

I'm going to frame this....hang it on my wall as a constant reminder of what I'm supposed to be doing here -- or trying to do.

~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº>
______________Ratleader______________

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

12 posted 2003-10-09 04:46 PM

Bluesy: Watch out, dear lady... or we'll be starting a mutual admiration society... for I adore yours... and you! *S* Thank you so much! *S*

scorpio: I'm so glad... thank you for hearing them so kindly! *S*

EA: You sweet lady... you touch my heart... and I do thank you so! *S*

Seymour: Thank you for finding them such, my friend. *S*

Endlessecho: It is indeed! *S*

Richy: Your kind words literally overwhelm me... leave me wondering "who, me?" *S* I thank you so very much!!

garysgirl: I was thinking of a favorite poet... just writing my awe. *S* Thank you so much for liking! *S*

Marge: ROFL... I kinda like that spandex part, too. LOL Thank you so much! *S*

Jamie: I know I've felt like a queen, just reading these lovely responses. *S* Thank you so very much! *S*

Cpat: And sometimes... we let words draw us... My library is full of word portraits... with wonderful additions appearing often. *S* Thank you very much! *S*

Ratleader: My friend, you do all this and more without fail... and you make it look so easy the effort involved is only obvious to someone trying to do half as well. *S* Thank you... so very much. *S*

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

13 posted 2003-10-09 05:09 PM

suthern, my friend...your words always make me smile, and your style is beautiful and complete...I strive to learn from you...~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~S~

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

14 posted 2003-10-09 06:14 PM

I honestly don't know what else to say, so I'm just going to stand here and do this---->

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2003-10-09 06:15 PM

Suthern...To be held in this esteem would be wonderful for anyone, and to achieve these goals as a person, as a writer, most amazing. This is beautifully done!

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

16 posted 2003-10-09 06:54 PM

This is beautiful...and I know...I know exactly what you mean. It does feel good, doesn't it?

Patricia

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

17 posted 2003-10-10 09:53 AM

Sunnyone: You humble me, sweet lady... for I'm the one learning... and lessons never felt so good. *S* Thank you so much! *S*

Edder: That'll work! LOL Thank you so much!

Martie: Thank you! *S* A verse for you would have to be titled vision... for
Through your eyes we see
Ordinary things made new
And memorable

Patricia: Yes. *S* Finding words we would have written ourselves if we could have written them... never fails to leave awe. *S* Thank you so much!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

18 posted 2003-10-10 01:40 PM

Mine
You write for many
But some touch me so deeply
Become my treasures.
======================

dang it all...the moth is late and you took all the words!

Oh well..then I'll just take THESE... heh

*moth running round forums yelling "mine, mine"*

loving free verse on your pen Ruthie-girl...

yeppers...its a poem.

a lovely tribute one at that

"Nature's first green is gold,
Her hardest hue to hold."
"So dawn goes down to day ...
Nothing gold can stay."

~Frost~

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

19 posted 2003-10-10 04:53 PM

(smiles) And no spandex would ever come close to the durability of your golden heart that reflects all these precious things; magic, lace, comfort! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, you are one of a kind, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Suthern, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

20 posted 2003-10-11 08:50 AM

JM: You without words?? LOL The sky is indeed falling! *G* ROFL @ yelling "mine, mine"... I needed that smile this morning! *G* Thank you very much! *S*

M'toe: No spandex is coming near my body... unless someone else is wearing it... stretch has its limits! LOL Thank you very much... your kind response is greatly appreciated. *S*

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