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iwontdrownagain
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since 2003-10-04
Posts 39
Massachusetts

0 posted 2003-10-09 11:25 AM


Read this before you read Recital so you can follow what my motive was for Recital

Wrapped in Passion

Until your last breath,
The last sparkle in your eye,
The last smile,
I’ll never stop loving you,
Embracing you.
Holding you.
Needing you.
Wanting you.
I’ll never let you go.
You are the one I need to live,
To breathe each breath
And to wake up each morning
To see the soft rays of sun
On your already beautiful face
With your lashes long and faultless,
Nothing gone awry.
Clothed in passion, breathing in tune
Contained in one another’s bodies,
Nothing amiss, nothing illicit needed
To make it real.
It’s as real as it gets.
I’ll never look back,
I’ll feel no regrets.
In paradise, where I’m waking in
With you, next to you, wrapped within you
Capering in your love and thoughts of passion
I know it’s what I want, what I have needed.

© Copyright 2003 Lynn Moynahan - All Rights Reserved
Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
1 posted 2003-10-09 12:05 PM


keep this up...enjoyed ever so much...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

2 posted 2003-10-10 01:45 PM


In paradise, where I’m waking in
With you, next to you, wrapped within you
Capering in your love and thoughts of passion
I know it’s what I want, what I have needed.

beautiful!

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
3 posted 2003-10-10 03:39 PM


I enjoyed the poem-I felt the emotion in it.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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