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Mon Cherie
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A vivacious young lady
I noticed her right away
She seemed so cheerful
Helped me all the way

There were times when
She was really down
I wish I could do something
To take away her frown

When I feel really bad
She would listen to me
Her gaze may seem far away
Well, at least she heard me

Though it really seems like
We wallow in self-pity
There must be an avenue for us
To vent our agony

Now she decides to leave
This inhumane madhouse
It feels like a sparkle
In my life has been doused

A dull ache twitches in my heart
At the very thought
Yet somehow I feel glad
Never again will she feel cross

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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1 posted 10-09-2003 10:52 AM       View Profile for arthur   Email arthur   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for arthur

thank you for your poem -arthur
Seymour Tabin
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Mon Cherie
Enjoyed the read.
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3 posted 10-09-2003 11:58 AM       View Profile for allamericanjoe   Email allamericanjoe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for allamericanjoe

Very much enjoyed this read.  Another "sparkle" will come!  

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time"  ~James taylor~

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4 posted 10-12-2003 09:53 AM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

Thanks, y'all...

Yeah, another sparkle will come. Juz gotta hang in there

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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i think your poems are getting better. there seems to be some kind of flow to them. keep up the good work!

am i not the sparkle that still remains in your life? haha!
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6 posted 07-27-2004 01:08 PM       View Profile for Mon Cherie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mon Cherie

I had an inkling about getting this deleted, but decided that I'll leave it in here anyway. Although the sentiments I first felt when I wrote this no longer exists, it's still my hard work and brain juices used in composing this piece. :P

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

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