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An Amber Tear
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An Amber Tear |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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An Amber Tear Within the amber, sealed a tear A bit of real from yesteryear Absorbed within a weathers clime A little bit of frozen time She holds it to the bright of sight To magnify the tear in light And turns it in a circles steer To amplify its awesome sheer And in the spirit of arcane She thinks about the tears distain What had caused this pain to flow? A mystery she’d love to know Perhaps it was a raindrop caught Or dewdrop was in her thought But teardrop would not leave her mind And teardrop it would stay unsigned. She wore it smart next to her heart A piece of frozen timeless art |
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allamericanjoe Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116Iredell county, NC |
WOW, that is incredibly creative. So many talented poets here. People like you humble me. I very much enjoyed this poem. In fact, it's probably my favorite since I've been coming here. Kudos to you my friend! Thank you for sharing that. Truly. best wishes ~JD~ "The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother." |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Seymour, this is wonderful and speaks to me quite deeply, as I do love amber and whenever I look into its treasures I wonder just in the way you put so masterfully. Library! Love, Margherita  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
allamericanjoe Thank you for the WOW, enjoyed your comment. Margherita, You are a sweety pie, thank you for the sweet comment. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (10-09-2003 08:24 AM).] |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
a little bit of frozen time is better then no time at all? No? Good morning my friend and thank you for this beauty. Love to you and yours  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you for this morning gem, Mr. T.! A pleasure to read and a treasure to keep!  ........done! It's saved to be savored again and again.You continue to amaze me, T-Man! Loveya! EA |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel Good morning my angel, its nice to have your presence here.  LeeJ, I think so, something is always better then nothing. LOL |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good morning Sy! And a beautiful way to start my day with a wonderful read like this!!  Tea's ready...I'll pour. ~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Be right there for morning hugs & tea. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Our new member americanjoe is in for a treat when the archives are back up, isn't he, Sy? If he thinks this one was a WOW, which of course it is...[you only leave the very best], then he's going to feel like a kid in a candy shop when he has a chance to go back and read all of your little treasures...  Good morning, Sy! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine You not only shine but leave candy as well. LOL |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Sy, This was very good and a great read for the morning.I always enjoy your writes for they bring me an insight that sometimes I hesitate to see.You are truly a gifted man with a wondrous heart. Crystal |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Crystal, You are a sweet heart. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
This write encompasses all that I adore so about your poetry... the word play and phrasing...the vocab...the compassionate chemistry of emotion and expression and always the heady mix of metaphor, personify and imagery all expertly displayed in your gift of rhyme and cadence. Youre my King of Cool and my Guru of Groovy.  Lest us not forget my Wizard of *Winkies*   |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, I miss you more today then yesterday and I missed you yesterday. WWRS |
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112 |
I enjoy, I have some amber, poem make me want to wear because it teardrop shape but of very happy time form special person |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
A bit of tenderness you have written here within this. Thanx Sy, nice. |
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Quiet Acquiescence Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 70somewhere out here |
Oh wow...this one I definitely like a lot. It's my first time back on this site in a couple months. Lovely poems were waiting for me. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lotus, A sweet remark thank you. Magnus Thank you Barry. Quiet, Enjoyed your comment, thank you. |
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