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SCREAMIN
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since 2003-04-28
Posts 51
US, Tx

0 posted 2003-10-09 12:18 PM



tired and lonely
skippin’ through hell
wantin’ you to hold me
but I’ll never tell

sittin’ by my window
watchin’ for you
prayin’ you don’t know
why I’m feelin’ so blue

hopeless and drained
trudgin’ through hell
my heart’s been constrained
but I’ll never tell

watchin’ the sunset
dreamin’ of you
prayin’ not to forget
hope you’re missin’ me too

tortured and anguished
stumblin’ through hell
all hope’s extinguished
but I’d never tell


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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-10-09 12:21 PM


The torture we put ourselves thorugh with not telling is evident here.Nicely penned.
Crystal

n2dmystic
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since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
2 posted 2003-10-12 10:55 AM


very real and raw, good write.  thank you

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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