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Riley
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in the pouring rain

0 posted 2003-10-08 09:49 PM



small eyes cast shadows on your wall
watch it to close and you will miss it
miss me dancing in the streets
in front of your house
while it rains outside somehow i am
smiling through it
you've forgotten everything you've seen
now you hope to see
as i do to
not the same me through different eyes
shaking my head i sit down
middle of the highway on the busiest
waiting for you to laugh me out of your life
you don't
smiling i thank you and walk away
your hand is missing from inside mine
it wasn't there in life but dreams held it true
now i know someday soon
we will be closer than ever
until then i'll sit outside staring into the sun

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

© Copyright 2003 Riley Grant - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-10-08 11:09 PM


This is so beautiful. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

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2 posted 2003-10-08 11:25 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Riley, this is beautifully sad, sweet friend, I hope everything is alright as you have such a golden heart that doesn't deserve tears and heartache! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is beautifully heartfelt, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Riley, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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3 posted 2003-10-08 11:43 PM


This is very good.
Crystal

Riley
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4 posted 2003-10-09 08:38 AM


loner- thanks for replying i am so glad you loved it


noah- i cannot thank you enough for your sweet words....ahhh life as a teen is so cruel sometimes is it not?


angelblueeyes- thank you so much for replying
**love**
ri

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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5 posted 2003-10-09 01:57 PM


A clever burn here, Ri.

.m.

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6 posted 2003-10-09 03:55 PM


well lippity stick licks, jolly frollies, and purple dillies.
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7 posted 2003-10-09 07:19 PM


riley girl!!!!

I missed you stupid

this is absolutely...library material....

don't run off again or I'll hunt YOU down.

neener neener neener

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

Riley
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in the pouring rain
8 posted 2003-10-09 09:30 PM


bsquirrel- thanks a lot...means more than i could say

de- shank ya muchly :P

liz- whats upppp! omg i haven't talked to you in forever....thanks a ton for replyin to lil old me

* the pouring rain kisses my lips with innocence as you look into my eyes *

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