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froggy
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since 2003-06-23
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Michigan

0 posted 2003-10-08 08:20 PM




You set my heart afire,
Filled my soul with a desire
of sin.

Closing my eyes I felt
the warmth of your touch
upon my skin as my heart
pounded with anticipation.

Your touch is like
that I've never known
As were your kisses.

Reaching out for you...

I realized it was
only a dream.

Do not wake me
for this is where...I wish to be.

© Copyright 2003 E.Griswold - All Rights Reserved
Marty Baird
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since 2003-09-20
Posts 90
Georgia, U.S.
1 posted 2003-10-08 08:31 PM


Dreaming can be enjoyable
PsychoticBunni
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 162
Mythical Atlantis
2 posted 2003-10-08 08:55 PM


wow. thst is so awesome!! i really like it cuz i think about that all the time. lol. catholic skool grl gets hot and heavy lol.

Meg-cheauvanistsshould be tortured mercilessly by being tied to a mast and listening to Sirens singing their sexual song

James_A_Fraser
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since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
3 posted 2003-10-08 09:47 PM


"I realized it was
only a dream.

Do not wake me
for this is where...I wish to be. "

Yes...dream can be even better than reality, if it's just the right one. Hold it tight, it may be trying to tell you something.



~~J

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4 posted 2003-10-08 11:43 PM




(big hugggssssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I know this feeling ever too well and believe dreaming is my favorite part of day as well! (sigh) Here's wishing for all your dreams to come true, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
5 posted 2003-10-08 11:45 PM


This is a great dream.Your writes intrigue me more and more.
Crystal

froggy
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since 2003-06-23
Posts 1893
Michigan
6 posted 2003-10-09 04:23 PM


Thank-you all for the nice comments.

Sometimes I wonder about my writing

:-)

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