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the_loner_23
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0 posted 2003-10-08 04:09 PM


The cold wind whips up
The smell of rain in the air
The clouds start to blacken
And mist fills the air
The rain becomes more steady
The wind cold as ice
As the autumn rain comes
And leaves just as fast

Cold hands means a warm heart

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-08 04:34 PM



Yes, blink and it's here,
blink again
and you're all wet!

Very nice, Julie!

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2 posted 2003-10-08 10:17 PM


And so glad it does....

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3 posted 2003-10-08 10:27 PM






(sigh) Oh Julie, this is lovely, sweet friend, I am happy to see you among all my friends back here in this re-opening affair! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Julie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

ThunderMage
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4 posted 2003-10-08 11:04 PM


Reminds me of a good classic RPG. Always have to have a scene in the rain for the hero to fight in.

What is life without poetry and adventure?
"Little sister" is just another way of saying "Guardian Angel"!

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5 posted 2003-10-08 11:21 PM


Hi Julie,  
I like your Autumn rain.
It's good to see you  here, lady.  
Hugs  
Ethel

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
6 posted 2003-10-08 11:24 PM


if it could stay longer...
would be beautiful

icebox
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in the shadows
7 posted 2003-10-08 11:36 PM


Rain is my favorite kind of sunshine.
angelblueyes
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8 posted 2003-10-08 11:39 PM


Yes it's here and before we could even blink.Nicely done.
Crystal

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9 posted 2003-10-09 09:22 PM


Julie, that was lovely.

Your poetry is blossoming!


Linda

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