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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-10-08 11:12 AM



You Touch Me


I transfer my daily thoughts,
crossing the guards of my heart
to bridge the gap, closing the distance the miles make.
But in this instant world, I can hear you,
feel you through the touch of hands
as we write our tales and shed our lines
until your moment becomes a moment in my mind.
I court each day, between the lines of hope
dusting the emptiness, waiting for the rainbow's end
to touch me once again.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2003-10-08 11:13 AM


I court each day, between the lines of hope
dusting the emptiness, waiting for the rainbow's end
to touch me once again.


we all enjoy being touched a special way again and again...you show this well in your words..nicely done.

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-10-08 11:20 AM





dertah
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3 posted 2003-10-08 11:21 AM


4 steps.  good write.
garysgirl
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4 posted 2003-10-08 11:33 AM


Maureen, I feel the same.
Hugs  
Ethel

nakdthoughts
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5 posted 2003-10-08 02:45 PM


Thanks all, I am just dusting off some of my thoughts from the past few days....thought I would share...


M

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