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teenpoet
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0 posted 2003-10-08 10:45 AM


It doesn't matter
how hard I try
It's always goin' to be
Me and Lonely
My best and only friend
my tried and true lover
Lonely's never left me yet
Lonely will always hover
I can try to run far and wide
Traisp through every dream
It doesn't really matter
Because Lonely will always see
Lonely holds me close every day
Lonely won't let me go
I'm beginning to see
That this will always be
Lonely will be my only one
Lonely will know my every thought
Lonely will possess me
And that's how my life shall be

~Blue Phoenix~

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
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1 posted 2003-10-08 10:47 AM


It doesn't matter
how hard I try
It's always goin' to be
Me and Lonely
My best and only friend
my tried and true lover
Lonely's never left me yet

Alicia, I know this well, and you wrote it
perfectly.  Very well done  TP

GhostWriter_6
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since 2001-09-03
Posts 237
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2 posted 2003-10-08 12:27 PM


enjoyed the read very much... enjoyed the subject matter as well.. keep doing what ya do teenpoet
teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
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3 posted 2003-10-08 04:16 PM


Yeah I'm pretty much obsessed with Lonely.  He's the only friend I'll have my whole life through.  Isn't that pathetic?

Let go of your concept of reality and try mine for a while...then we'll see how long you last.

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