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Amature2
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0 posted 2003-10-08 10:07 AM



Concealed

My heart aches
In-between every beat
With emptiness around it
As it goes in retreat
There is a storm inside it
A downpour of tears
The tears I cannot shed
When the sky is clear
And the silent thunder rumbling
Deep inside of me
Are my feelings and emotions
The ones I keep Concealed


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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2003-10-08 10:13 AM


I like the way your thoughts revealed
what you thought you had concealed.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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