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ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

0 posted 2003-10-08 09:32 AM

Somethings not right
it's in the air
the dark of night
has lost it's glare

One stormy night
as rains did seep
the moon, out of sight
began to weep

"It will end soon
and things will change
A crack in the moon
is nothing strange"

Why do I feel
so weak and crossed ...
for the storm is real
and tears fall lost

Romance is gone
drained from the heart
to the breaking dawn
love falls apart

One's outlook can be another's expression.

[This message has been edited by ctowen (10-08-2003 09:38 AM).]

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2003-10-08 09:55 AM

Why do I feel
so weak and crossed ...
for the storm is real
and tears fall lost

Romance is gone
drained from the heart
to the breaking dawn
love falls apart

very good Craig...I know the feeling...I have tried to glue my moon together once too often

hugs
M

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2003-10-08 10:27 AM

Feeling this all too well. Good work, Craig.
Sandra

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

3 posted 2003-10-08 10:35 AM

I think I've seen those cracks in the moon. I know I've felt them
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

dertah
Senior Member

since 2003-06-18

Posts 584

4 posted 2003-10-08 11:32 AM

this makes want to put a bullet between the eyes of every panda that couldnt screw to save its species. makaveli!!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-10-08 01:08 PM

Oh, yes, there have been those times in my life as well when I have only seen the cracks in the moon and not the smiling face...

You have expressed those feelings very well.

EA

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

6 posted 2003-10-08 01:43 PM

ctowen...Touching words. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

pandonov
Member

since 2003-10-03

Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence

7 posted 2003-10-08 01:55 PM

"a crack in the moon
is nothing strange"
which one my friend , they are so many.
thx. enjoyed

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

8 posted 2003-10-08 03:23 PM

Cracks in the moon,
We often find.
Though the deepest one,
I fear is mine.

GREAT poem. I feel this one in my chest!

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