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HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
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Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2003-10-08 08:08 AM



When Thoughts Toss And Turn

Why is it ,I often wonder
When I lay down in bed
That so many thoughts
Swirl through my head

The grey matter chaos
Becomes a nightmare
All the questions begin
Why, when and where

An insomniac dilemma
Arrives late in the night
Often remaining active
Until first morning light

It was dormant by day
Then decides to return
By capturing my mind
Thoughts toss and turn

Writing down thoughts
I was not wasting time
Insomnia can be used
Spent creating a rhyme

HopeĀ©2003

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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1 posted 2003-10-08 08:18 AM


In my book, your thoughts are never wasted when they are written down to share with us...you my dear are perfection and part of a family hear..and we all need each others input...to complete each day.  Words are the brilliance of understanding, love, compassion, and are windows to the soul...

Thank you for your mind and heart, and for sharing a very special part of you with us.  Love and hugs

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
2 posted 2003-10-08 08:30 AM


Hey Lee I am so pleased you enjoy my rhyme
with kimnd replies like you gave
you can view in my soul windows anytime

Hope

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3 posted 2003-10-11 08:53 PM




(smiles) Oh Hope, you are not alone, sweet friend, I too am an insomniac muse victim and too have all these thoughts that keep me awake to write them at night! (big hugggsssssss) Fear not, as it is perfectly natural, yay, write on, dearest Hope, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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