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Take Anything You Want
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Take Anything You Want |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada 
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Your honesty was the take on the matter the things that strike insufferable remain a brief novella in your history the church got all of your mother's money and her body leaving you broke with nothing left but passion the passion you brought to me refined out of forgiveness the same passion you would share with me in a world of lost art the art of true acceptance distinguished from all reason making my mysterious search for wholesome love, complete........ the first time I looked at your glowing freckled face I thought the freckles would be rough to the touch but you were so fresh and farm girl beautiful that I just had to try, had to somehow steal a stroke, a brush against your skin and when I finally did it was like touching the smooth open blossom of a lily and then our first kiss your lips were moist and full felt like they had been softened by a Godly sent sweet misty spring rain as you gave yourself to me without any apprehension My insides pushed my heart into my throat the magic that sometimes falls out of heaven captured us for the duration it was then I realized passion without love was against the rules of conscience oh how that kiss has never died now that same kiss speaks your mind with love and familiarity, reminds me of your simple brilliance, accompanied by your angel scent and the treasure of a thousand smiles you always give to me free I gently break away and I have to tell you everything is alright you can take anything you want from me. © Eric True The best teachers have the biggest ears |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! powerful and deeply passionate! inspiring! ~ARH |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
it was then I realized passion without love was against the rules of conscience I agree...and E, I must tell you that this is a most beautiful write...most beautiful ever M |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Beautiful!!! Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
I agree it's the most romantic piece I've ever read, heart on your sleeve doesn't even come close. If you offered this to me, I'd pack my belongings in a saddlebag and hitchhike across the world to be with you. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You did it again.... |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey Keth I am with you...but we can always dream huh??? once again a beautiful poem, E |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I feel like crying with the overwhelming beauty of your loving words. "My insides pushed my heart into my throat the magic that sometimes falls out of heaven captured us for the duration it was then I realized passion without love was against the rules of conscience" ~ Yes, love as it is meant to be...  Words ever so 'True' Love & Light, Linda |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Eric~ This was beyond words! Outstanding!! Susan |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
excellent work. inspiring.......... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Eric, you have one of the most chivalrous hearts of the New Age, sweet friend, any woman would love to touch your golden heart that offers nothing but pure and true love and if they take things from it leave you with something in return! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Eric...You have a magic touch with words! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I seem to remember somewhere in the archives of my mind....a comment by a certain poet about me being an incurable romantic, or helpless OLD romantic....or words to that effect... Hmmmmmmm, let me think a little on this one....it is right on the tip of my tongue...errrr....quill...... Excellent write Eric...very nicely done. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks to everyone for the positive kind replies to this piece I appreciate it very much! Eric |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Silky...James |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thanks for the silk James I appreciate it! Eric |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
WOW! True love and passion. Very powerful. ~K~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thank you Kahlil for the Wow, I don't get too many of those....I appreciate your comments very much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
whew! very sensual, passionate, and deeply touching |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
First I get wow then a whew and I am certainly appreciative of such kind remarks. Thank you so very much PS for the reply. Eric Ain't doin nothin at all |
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