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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-08 05:32 AM



Hitchin’ A Ride

Spooky days are comin’.
Window covered with webs of dusty gray.
Scary sounds and flickering lights fill the night.
Shadows playing the devilish game of hide and seek.
Doors creaking and the wind moaning in ghoulish
delight.
Witches flying high and witches flying low,
scratching and tickling that ole moon with their
rickety ole brooms as they go zooming on by.
Listen! Do you hear?
Clank, ching, clunk.
“Darn ole broom won’t start.”
Sputter, bang, cough.
“Guess I’ll have to hitch a ride and go to the
North Pole.
Maybe Santa will give me new Cadillac broom.”
Bang, bang, chug, sputter, cough.
“Come on broom, darn your ole hide, climb higher.
Higher!
Look out for those T r e e e e e s!”
As the wind howls and darkness creeps into silent
corners, you hear this high pitched cackling sound
high atop the trees.
“Oh dear! Oh my! I think I need a new broom.”

Love Bon-Bon

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dingusjr
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since 2003-09-24
Posts 415
Missouri
1 posted 2003-10-08 06:05 AM


Cute, Bonnie.   Perhaps we could open a used broom lot!   Larry
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
2 posted 2003-10-08 06:13 AM


very nicely penned   Lady Poetess
p/s bon bon i see the forum where i first met you has opened again,,,


                                                                           

[This message has been edited by QjQ (10-08-2003 06:16 AM).]

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-10-08 06:53 AM


You are so funny and creative...what a great read....thanks for the smiles...and with a warm heart wishing you the best day today.  Luv ya sis, me ;0)
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