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Kandi
Member

since 2000-06-14

Posts 354
North of Hell

0 posted 2003-10-08 02:07 AM

Here I am again -
choking on the foot
I’m getting good at shoving in my mouth,
spitting out thoughts
faster than my brain can filter them.
Another attempt at verbal suicide.

There you go again -
turning your back
to drown out what I never wanted to say,
walking away
from something you asked to start.
Another photo op of your back.

Here I stand alone -
tripping over words
that you’ll probably never hear,
hoping the wind is on my side.
Just wanted to tell you I love you.

GG
Member Elite

since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

1 posted 2003-10-08 02:13 AM

man, thats always how it seems to work isn't it. Well written, and here's to hoping you aren't alone long.

Always, Alyssa

- And so it was that time stood still -
(blink, breathe, stand, fight)

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

2 posted 2003-10-08 02:55 AM

Things always do look clearer when some time has passed. Don't you just hate it when you can't seem to find the right word to say. Then later it seems to come almost like a formula written for success.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2003-10-09 12:04 PM

There you go again -
turning your back
to drown out what I never wanted to say,
walking away
from something you asked to start.
Another photo op of your back.

Wonderful expression!

Bravo Kandi~

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

4 posted 2003-10-09 12:05 PM

yes... nicely done...

seems to be my favorite meal at times..my own foot...and choking on my words or choking back words...lol...

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

5 posted 2003-10-09 12:13 PM

Communicating with the opposite sex has never been my strong suit and I've had to wash down many a nike with some nice warm attonement for things poorly said. Nice read.

"The secret of life is enjoying the passage of time" ~James taylor~

Endlessecho
Member

since 2003-09-05

Posts 398
I live within myself

6 posted 2003-10-09 12:22 PM

"turning your back
to drown out what I never wanted to say,"

I've been there. Well-expressed.

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