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Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-10-07 11:20 PM

Picture by Josephine Wall

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We share a part of our lives
Every time we sit and write
As we expose our deepest thoughts
And give others an insight

The written word holds many powers
And they can cause a heart to melt
As they orchestrate our feelings
So many emotions can be felt

Words often have the ability
To make us reach for the sky
But some words are filled with sadness
Which can make the reader cry

A picture can be seen
Right before your very eyes
Words of love and romance
Cause one's heart to grow in size

I am forever the romantic
From my heart and soul I share
So let's embark on a journey
And let my words take you there

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"The words of a poet
can speak volumes
'tho no words are actually spoken
He has the ability to make
a connection with the heart"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-07 11:24 PM

this is very beautiful and truthful. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

allamericanjoe
Member

since 2003-10-02

Posts 116
Iredell county, NC

2 posted 2003-10-07 11:28 PM

You echo my thoughts!
well written, beautifully done.

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

3 posted 2003-10-07 11:45 PM

This is beautiful and you always share your most inner thoughts with us.You are an amazing man.

Crystal

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

4 posted 2003-10-07 11:48 PM

Ahh, Sue..the deepest depths are plumbed and brought forth to the beauty of the day with your words. Very nicely done, very nicely indeed...very gentle smile

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

5 posted 2003-10-08 01:05 AM

Sue: Whoever said "The pen is mightier than the sword" really knew what he was talking about! Your poem proves that all over again.

Love
Betty Lou

Betty Lou Hebert

SharaRose
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2501
Somewhere out there~

6 posted 2003-10-08 03:38 AM

Very nice.

love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

NewEnglandlazurlu
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-01-04

Posts 7470
A Mountain Paradise

7 posted 2003-10-08 10:07 PM

Words often have the ability
To make us reach for the sky
But some words are filled with sadness
Which can make the reader cry

Sue, these words of yours hold so much truth and feeling. Another glorious poem from you my friend.

Hugs and luvs, Marti

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

8 posted 2003-10-08 10:12 PM

(smiles) Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous poetry always make sme smile as it takes us so many special places where faeries blow bubbles and unicorns gallop and lovers read wonderful poems to one another! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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