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Open Poetry #29

When The Day Ends Raw

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2003-10-07 11:08 PM

I bleed words
when the day ends raw
and I can't escape the mirror's find.

I sorry myself,
wrapped taut
feel the pounding in my throat
and wonder why...just why...

My wounds open
eyes go blank, their color dulled,
the spark gone as the night edges closer
and I am deafened to the night's melody
that only yesterday, promised me more.

I bleed my words
the day is done and Alice and I
leave well enough alone...

A

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-10-07 11:18 PM

I really enjoyed this read.

Cold hands means a warm heart

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2003-10-08 08:51 AM

thank you Julie

M ... sorry...forgot who I was again

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-08-2003 08:52 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2003-10-08 08:56 AM

Alicethruglass,
It will all change again. Enjoyed the write.

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