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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-10-07 10:58 PM



like stick figures
we communicate
in dots and dashes
bouquets tossed
and crosed
letter t's and i's
bookends/silhouettes
on either side
of glass
palms press
as we grasp
for truths it hides
we hypthosize
spin romance
between typed lines
and rhymes
yet only
our auras
really touch
for now
though
there is solace
and sadness
knowing
we can delete
eachother
anytime

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (10-08-2003 09:57 PM).]

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the_loner_23
Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA
1 posted 2003-10-07 11:15 PM


This speaks truth. Awesome write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-10-08 07:42 PM


I'll never forget my affair with a fantastic lady from Montreal...I was falling in love with her...one word after another...finally she told me that I was becoming too attached to her and she cancelled the affair...all this on line, never meeting, but talking of it...never again...James
QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-10-08 07:52 PM


very nice,,,

                                                                        

James_A_Fraser
Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972
Out Making Anticlines
4 posted 2003-10-08 09:49 PM


These things do happen, but turning them off is cold comfort, if you can do it at all.

Better to find the key and turn it in the lock, fight to keep what has come to you.



~~J

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-10-09 01:25 AM


bookends/silhouettes
on either side
of glass
palms press
as we grasp
for truths it hides

Loved your poem girlie,  
and those lines most of all!

Talk about setting ourself up!!

angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
6 posted 2003-10-09 01:38 AM


Yep, these very rarely seem to work out although there are a few exceptions.Penned well.
Crystal

HopeS
Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia
7 posted 2003-10-09 02:06 AM


Yes and happening more and more the last few years , computers full of broken hearts and tears

Hope

Jason Lyle
Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
8 posted 2003-10-09 02:28 AM


Very cool, and very true...don't delete me Michelle!

Jason

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
9 posted 2003-10-09 06:48 AM


thanks boys and girls,

bklynboy
Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660
florida
10 posted 2003-10-09 12:50 PM


Sounds like my life sometimes.
gemjop
Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA
11 posted 2003-10-10 07:08 AM


Oh yes, long distance i do not reccomend, its so easy to hide behind yer screen. works for some, i'm sure, but naaaaa. There are FAR better things to do on the net than find love. (buying clothes)
Amature2
Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 416

12 posted 2003-10-10 08:21 AM


inkedgoddess, i know of what you write, my very first post in here was similar to this, will repost it. "Cyber Screens"
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
13 posted 2003-11-14 02:21 AM


never thought of this...what a perspective.
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