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la luna cariñosa |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
you come to me when you come to me like wept happiness on the taste of fallen tears across dark kisses yet you wane sunrise into silence and I am withered and unfed by the umbra of your dying light |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This is so sad but a great poem. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks, loner. If you find beauty there, it pleases me. coyote  "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
to just hear her say papi like only a latina can..... |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks for reading, Dertah. True words spoken with feeling. coyote "Who knows if to live is to be dead, and to be dead, to live? And we really, it may be, are dead; in fact I once heard sages say that we are now dead, |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Coyote~ 'you come to me like wept happiness on the taste of fallen tears' Just a *sigh* of understanding admiration for these thoughts~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...ah, the sanctuary of the fallen... it is beautiful in a very sad, lost soul sort of way... |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thanks ,Marge. I'm honored that it made you sigh. coyote |
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coyote Senior Member
since 2001-03-17
Posts 1077 |
Thank You, Sunshine. I am pleased you liked it. coyote |
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