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Past My Fingertips
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Past My Fingertips |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought 
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I think that I’m hallucinating A mystical resonating With mutilated seams Holding pasts, within my skin Because the scars keep pulling open And inside things are still broken I can see a light… And it’s shining on my sin. So now I’ll run away And join another nightmare With the answer to prayer As always, Past my fingertips. Because, We only wake in horror But we never last that second. We can never dream that second… When screams are given reason, And prayers are given answers, When We never wake again. - And so it was that time stood still - |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
I really like the way you expressed your feelings. Awesome write. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
Damn...this, im keeping. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
yes, GG, that last second remains past our fingertips, as it should |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Excellent writing...very deep and expressive. Eric |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Very well expressed, bring cause for pause and thought. Thanx. |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Allyssa, this is very thought-provoking writing. Hope all is well?  Hugs  Ethel |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Prayers can be answered in multiple states, we sleep so the spirits can hone us and then in the daylight when we feel revitalized that's one prayer answered! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is wonderful, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Alyssa, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
loner, Thank you. I'm quite glad you think it is  KoKo, I'm honored! Thanks very much, glad you liked it. Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Midnitesun, Yes, I suppose you're right. Not what I like, but it is as it should be... Thank you for the read and reply. Ericc, Thank you very much, guess deep and expressive means de-pressive, eh? Again, thank you.Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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GG Member Elite
since 2002-12-03
Posts 3532Lost in thought |
Magnus, y'know, you're one of my favorite poets here, its always nice to get a reply from you, I'm honored! Thank you very much Ethel, good, I always like provoking thought in people! Thank you And as for me, all has never been well, but all is as good as its likely to get, and there isn't anything worth concern. Thank you for the care though Noah, ah so I need sleep! No wonder! I haven't had more then two hours of sleep at once for over 2 years (except when the doctors send me to the hosp and drug me). It seems that God is teaching me a bit about the man doesn't live on bread alone thing.. and I'm learning to recieve my refreshing purely through Him. I'm alright with that though Always, Alyssa - And so it was that time stood still - |
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