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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-10-07 09:56 PM


The Hidden

It's the brilliance that lights up your smile
when early morning bends.
It's splendor that displays itself
as dreamtime nears its end.
It's opulence of friendship's hand
that reaches in your touch.
Through words the riches show their face
a welcome sight of such.

It takes the place of loneliness
when farewells steal away.
When tarnished rubbings dull the cast
yet ease the worried fray.
It's words that come from lips to hand
and cross the river divide.
And conquer, that in truth to find
the hidden art inside.

M

*just a little something to feed my addiction...while waiting

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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EagleScorpion
Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever
1 posted 2003-10-07 10:28 PM


nice.. very nice...

***
I shall reply in rhyme to you

these words speak of themselves, they do

the river divide they are in time..

.. born of mind and hand.


inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
2 posted 2003-10-07 11:10 PM


just a little something to feed my addiction...while waiting

something well said, id say
and what are we waiting for, do we even know anymore?

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-10-07 11:15 PM


thank you ES...
I love responses in rhyme...

"these words speak of themselves"
yes they do...for some.

M

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
4 posted 2003-10-07 11:16 PM


Hi Michele, amazing how hard it is to get by without Passions and all the friends we've made...

hugs to you
M

allamericanjoe
Member
since 2003-10-02
Posts 116
Iredell county, NC
5 posted 2003-10-07 11:44 PM


beautiful!
Logan
Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641
Arkansas
6 posted 2003-10-07 11:53 PM


The hidden in the mind is what brings the sun to shine the way...very gentle smile to you
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