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Wake Alone
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Lotus Breeze Member
since 2003-09-06
Posts 112
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Wake to emptiness Clouds of gray give rain endless Morning loneliness Things done show you most caring Now wish for time of sharing. I woke this before problems, gives me great joy to post now. Thanks to the fixer of poetry passions. |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
in the passage of time and with the acts of cariing we are moved to want to share.... you capture this with a style and a delicacy that befits your name. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
we are a people society who needs and cherishes love. Beautifully written and as your heart, you will be endowed with the spendor of love throughout your lifetime. Tremendous! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lotus Thank you for posting, enjoyed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Very well penned. Loved it! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
beautiful |
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