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The Perfect Kiss

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Mor-Estal Landis
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0 posted 10-07-2003 07:14 PM       View Profile for Mor-Estal Landis   Email Mor-Estal Landis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mor-Estal Landis


Clam and Soothing, your voice is moving.
Mystic and enticing, your gaze is revitalizing.
My love, my lass, when I kiss you I want it to last.
Id give everything just to see you smile.
I know it may seem steep, but it would be worth my wile.
To cry your tears, to suffer your years.
I would take away your pain,
Mask it with our love, to make our gain.
Youre my sweet angel, my addiction, my high,
Youre my only chance in life, please dont let me die.
Hold me tight, for Ill do the same for you.
Love me forever, as I love you to.
Dont let it be false, you know mine is true.
Id walk to my end,
Id slave until my will bends.
Id give up my life, my light, my happiness,
to ensure you just one everlasting moment of bliss.
Id do anything, even just to imagine,
Your mystical, enticing, perfect kiss
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1 posted 10-07-2003 07:15 PM       View Profile for Kaoru   Email Kaoru   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kaoru

Strong, and lovely.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 10-07-2003 07:18 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Mor-Estal Lan,
I think you said it all. Enjoyed
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


3 posted 10-07-2003 08:23 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Wow! That would be some KISS!--the "Perfect Kiss"!!!

Welcome to Passions! Sounds like you will fit 'write' in here!

Warm, welcoming hugs,

Earth Angel

P.S. Kissing is my favourite food, next to angel food cake!
JamesMichael
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4 posted 10-09-2003 12:18 AM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice...James
angelblueyes
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Welcome to Passion's.This was full of strength and love and will carry you too many happy days.
Crystal
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6 posted 01-06-2004 10:18 AM       View Profile for teenpoet   Email teenpoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for teenpoet

Beautiful, beautiful...I actually haven't read that one yet.  I like it.

When you twist around to see the past you're missing your chance to glimpse the future.

 
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