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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-10-04 05:14 PM


Do you remember that movie, love, you held me in your arms, while we watched Time In A Bottle, on that wide blue sofa of yours, upstairs, on the 2nd floor....you held me very close, while I cried.

You’ve kissed me so long, I’m no longer mine, but yours
Well meaning curious things become an autonomy of flavor
Playing as infants while buildings quiver, forming unison with nature
Why….why
I would die rather yes, that’s right, rather die
Then deprive you of happiness
And….I’ve maintained all facade of happiness,
In your heart wrenching absence
Sweet breath gives me the sweetest eyes, constantly risking absurdity
Damp with dewy thoughts lifts an ear of voices near
Steady, as an evening star, I am lost within you
Interrelationships enable “you” to better yourself
What society refuses, you have granted me, repeating closer, dreams forever
In amorous moods, green eyes ablaze, the eager heroine, was you!
Where pure meaning gives words to recognition, knowledge
Drowsy summer afternoons, what a marvel!
Going a little further, truly, in nostalgia and light,
So delicate, disquieting, and richly desired, I fondle a prepared fate
Where colors change and eclipsed ideas, voyage bearing miracles
Siren voices then had stayed, you, my fortune, foliage and brilliant fire
Fortitude and spirits sprayed my thoughts, like a cat, marking his territory
We, two, have found the Golden Fleece, in my heart grew magic forests
Now, without you, I am the author of a written memory, oh how extremely, naïve…
Innocent I was, then…your promises never quit explained themselves
My grieving face turned with your hands, to face your mysterious touch
Love and lust declared you the brighter side, by an echo of an ancient sense
You said, the fartherest prospect of my kiss was like a call of passion and you’d
Bide you final bed, dancing heedlessly, memorizing my spiritual words
Entreating dear power, carved and draping over my gaping holes, Yes, that’s what you said, “for art and canvases are eternal”

Now time is on my side, even though my senses are numb
Self-assembly gathers in a closer land…flesh eating confusion
Figured out, grinning and bold, like tarot cards factual
That indulgence shall never satisfy, those stormy nights
Bittersweet, the magic in that space was you and me…you and me…

Yet, for the brave, there is a higher form of consciousness
And I am acquainted with your affairs…..
With or without you, my love, I shall have it all
I perceive even the echoes of you are fading away, no…
This dying dream inspires me to lock the visions in my mind
Warm, sensual dreams, responding to ephemeral arms, that are no longer yours.
Look at me my friend, my lover, time forgives flesh, and only
Time lasts…only time….lasts


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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2003-10-04 05:24 PM


"Yet, for the brave, there is a higher form of consciousness
And I am acquainted with your affairs…..
With or without you, my love, I shall have it all
I perceive even the echoes of you are fading away, no…
This dying dream inspires me to lock the visions in my mind
Warm, sensual dreams, responding to ephemeral arms, that are no longer yours.
Look at me my friend, my lover, time forgives flesh, and only
Time lasts…only time….lasts"


Amazing once again Lee....a wonderful piece!
Much enjoyed the read on this blustery cool early Autumn day.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-10-08 07:35 PM


And time comes and goes...James
QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-10-08 07:50 PM


terrific,,,,

                                                                        

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