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electronicshaman New Member
since 2003-10-04
Posts 1florida |
Peaches being so sweet in harvest possibly years away Birds in innocent hunger with playful patrons breezes of fortune that blow dreams of prosperity Where is the anger? Left behind in yesterdays sorrow People pretending to be fish in aquariums of desolation pisces speaks sardonically without purpose floating fashion,spiritual metaphor constantly changing does it worry you? i didnt think so highway suddenly rotates beaches in sight moving without power,effortless lifes picture on a boat in sail of tomorrow John Gentry 9-7-85 |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
"People pretending to be fish in aquariums of desolation pisces speaks sardonically without purpose floating fashion,spiritual metaphor constantly changing does it worry you? i didnt think so" I enjoyed this, John...very nicely done. I'll be looking forward to more from you. Welcome to Passions.  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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Miah Senior Member
since 2002-08-26
Posts 1062Pennsylvania |
Really well done Scenery! Welcome to Passions!!! enjoy your stay.  Always drink upstream from the herd. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
People pretending to be fish in aquariums of desolation I l@ve those lines And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!" |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Welcome to Passions John! Very much enjoyed your first post. I look forward to seeing more of your work. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Where is the anger? Left behind in yesterdays sorrow wonderful writing, very interesting views M |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
 What a tremendous write, very much enjoyed reading |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting! Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Awesome |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
beautiful john and welcome to the passion...h |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssssss) Oh John, your lovely debut is just beaming with scenery, sweet friend, this is truly spellbinding and most enjoyable to read! (smiles) You truly spell poetry like a gentle ship on the water, sweet friend, I love it! Welcome to Passions, sweet John, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your colorful poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet John, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Welcome to Passion's.May you find the strength and comfort that I've found here.This is great.  The imagery, the metaphors, the flow of your words.Well done. Crystal |
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