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Open Poetry #29

Just a thought...

Ku'uipo
Junior Member

since 2003-09-25

Posts 42

0 posted 2003-10-04 07:01 AM

I know what was,
All that used to be,
And find contentment in knowing,
It's just a memory.

ice
Member Elite

since 2003-05-17

Posts 3404
Pennsylvania

1 posted 2003-10-04 08:10 AM

Ku'uipo
A short poem of acceptance, good form....nicely done...enjoyed it
---ice---

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2003-10-04 08:16 AM

pretty cool

Rick
Member Elite

since 2001-06-21

Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia

3 posted 2003-10-04 09:08 AM

I know what was,
All that used to be,
And find contentment in knowing,
It's just a memory.

I know not of all
But know the past has been
The present I will lose
But treasure what I've seen

I enjoyed your write and replying to it, thank you for that, I look forward to reading more of your work.

Sincerely
Rick

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

4 posted 2003-10-04 09:11 AM

There is a lot of wisdom in this one.
Very helpful for people to do this.

Hugs

Ethel

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