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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-10-03 09:48 PM


~*~

You are one in a million
a strange kind of magic
in truth,that sheds the brightest light
and I,
a careless act of consequence.

I should have known better
my love cannot pretend.
No one has ever come that close
or gave me reason to believe,
taking me back to when.

Kept safely under your spell
come my secret heart
pull me in a little closer
so I will never be tempted again.

Light my fire with a snap of your fingers
swallowing the flames,
share the dark side of my dreams
and let me spin.

Mesmerize me with your waving wand
and hold my gaze in awe.

~*~


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Mistletoe Angel
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1 posted 2003-10-03 09:55 PM




(smiles) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, and may you forever be mesmerized by your loves magic and without being tricked by loose pockets and tiny keys! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Aimster
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2 posted 2003-10-03 10:20 PM


wow...you are amazing, you know
that? every word you write just floats
across the page--hmm maybe a magic wand
is responsible for that too.
take care,
amy

"love is like a butterfly--
if you chase it,
it will surely fly away,instead
hold it close and watch it grow into
something beautiful"
~me~

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-10-03 10:22 PM


Mesmerize me with your waving wand
and hold my gaze in awe.


terrific lines expressed,,,,

                                                                    

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In Your Poetic Mind
4 posted 2003-10-03 10:23 PM


Lori~


as lovely as the poet.....and then some.... hugsssss


Lauren~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

James_A_Fraser
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Out Making Anticlines
5 posted 2003-10-03 11:47 PM


....Snap!
....around you go.....





I love your style, but the real draw for me is the way you look at the world.



~~J

Martie
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6 posted 2003-10-03 11:50 PM


Lori...You are magic so many times!
vlraynes
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7 posted 2003-10-04 12:21 PM



"Light my fire with a snap of your fingers
swallowing the flames,
share the dark side of my dreams
and let me spin.

Mesmerize me with your waving wand
and hold my gaze in awe."



Love this, Lori...truly, I do.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Richy
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8 posted 2003-10-04 05:37 AM



Bluesy, this poem is quite possibly, the best one of yours yet!

“I should have known better
my love cannot pretend.
No one has ever come that close
or gave me reason to believe,
taking me back to when.”

When or if that special time ever comes, it would be nice, if we could know better...

Now as far as:

“and I, a careless act of consequence”

I’m sorry, but that is something, that simply could never be possible...

Richy



ethome
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9 posted 2003-10-04 07:02 AM


Being such a devoted lover of the blues I've always loved your handle, "Blues Serenade" Too cool.
This is nicely written and runs in depth with the inner images you're portraying.

I hope you don't mind if I write a song someday using your handle as the title.....?

Eric

The best teachers have the biggest ears

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-10-04 09:32 AM


Lori, this is absolutely beautiful...
as is all your work. I missed you
while I wasn't on here much.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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11 posted 2003-10-04 09:36 AM


Lori...Enjoyed very much.Your words flow so smooth. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

Seymour Tabin
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12 posted 2003-10-04 09:48 AM


Lori,
A tall order but I'm sure it will be filled.

vandana
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13 posted 2003-10-04 10:45 AM


nicely written
Duncan
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14 posted 2003-10-04 01:16 PM


"Light my fire with a snap of your fingers
swallowing the flames,
share the dark side of my dreams
and let me spin."

Love this verse Lori...very cool write!  


Wind
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15 posted 2003-10-04 01:57 PM


ahhh..was waiting for this

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

wayoutwalt
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16 posted 2003-10-04 02:03 PM


i'ze mez more eyes'd

cool yuh

1slick_lady
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17 posted 2003-10-04 02:13 PM


MMMMMMMMMMM don't you just love magic? ...h

littlewing
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18 posted 2003-10-04 02:30 PM


Bluesy?

you got me with the first stanza this time:

You are one in a million
a strange kind of magic
in truth,that sheds the brightest light
and I,
a careless act of consequence.

yes indeed
tweets
xxoo

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19 posted 2003-10-08 10:01 PM


"I should have known better
my love cannot pretend. "

Ain't it so! But you've got the magic if anybody does....and it's found in being true to you.

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inkedgoddess
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20 posted 2003-10-08 10:37 PM


share the dark side of my dreams
and let me spin.

gotta love the darkside

Edder
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21 posted 2003-10-08 10:40 PM


I'm with Liz...only add an "anxiously" in there somewhere.
suthern
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22 posted 2003-10-09 09:40 AM


You are one in a million
a strange kind of magic

And so are you... don't ever forget that. *S*

Excellent write, my friend... and I like seeing this picture back again! *S*

angelblueyes
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23 posted 2003-10-09 09:55 AM


This is wonderful.There's always such heart and passion in your wirtes that it makes me keep coming back for more.You entice the heart and enlighten the spirit. You shall have all of this and more.
Crystal

Ceinwyn
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24 posted 2003-10-09 09:57 AM


drooling over here..yes I have someone in mind strange kind of magic...yes yes ohhh yes lol sorry moment  

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (10-09-2003 09:57 AM).]

Earth Angel
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25 posted 2003-10-09 10:28 AM


"Mesmerize me with your waving wand
and hold my gaze in awe."

~ So mote it be!

I love your bluesy-woozy writing!

Love & Light,
Linda



BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
26 posted 2003-10-09 12:53 PM


Thank you so much for reading everyone.

Bluesy-woozy?  I kinda like the sound of that.

Many hugs all around~

Gentle Spirit
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27 posted 2003-10-09 01:16 PM


You are one in a million
a strange kind of magic
in truth,that sheds the brightest light
and I,
a careless act of consequence.

I should have known better
my love cannot pretend.
No one has ever come that close
or gave me reason to believe,
taking me back to when.


sometimes I swear you read my mind...
I love this Lori.  I'm so glad I didnt miss it!

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