Somewhere (Linda's challenge)

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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

0 posted 2003-10-03 09:21 PM

you
let me know
that it was your
time to go
before
I really
ever knew
you
came to me
through broken
radio frequencies....

...Somewhere... Somewhere... Somewhere...

an angel's voice
bridging the space
between
heaven and my heart

There's a place for us

I wish
I wasn't so scared
so that
I could
feel
hear
your subtle ways
again
funny
we bonded ever
so quickly
fell so
comfortably into your arms
funny
how
time really doesn't play a factor
when it comes to love...

A time and a place for us ...

where we'll meet
bond all over
and fall
so comfortably into each others arms
again

PS

especially for my Grandma Piper as well as my Grandma Brandon...both passed away around the same time funny I was never really close to both of them, Grandma Piper I just met 3x or less and Grandma Brandon I basically knew my whole life but got close when it was too late...both came to me nonetheless...this song came on when my radio wasn't plugged in...and sure enough stopped when my step mum called to tell me Grandma Piper passed...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (10-03-2003 09:45 PM).]

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2003-10-03 09:51 PM

(big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me cry as I know deep down your grandmothers Brandon and Piper both sung to you through the unamplified radio to let you know they'll always love you and they're OK and just let you know they'll always guide you even when they've passed away! (kiss on cheek) This is beautiful, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, this is a most beautiful challenge, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kristen, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2003 10:47 PM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

2 posted 2003-10-03 10:45 PM

Kris,

this is absolutely beautiful
and you know?

They are watching, believe this
I sure do
*smile*

A time and a place for us ...

for sure . . .

This reminded me of Bill's gram
who I still catch the scent
of in my home
thank you
xxoo

gemjop
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since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

3 posted 2003-10-04 04:16 AM

I declare this one of your best Kris. Damn, some of those lines in there....

truly...

going into my library.

~I wanna live, I wanna give, I've been a miner for a heart of gold~ Neil Young

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-10-04 04:34 AM

There is a prayer here~

Lovely poem and tribute, Ceinwyn~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

5 posted 2003-10-04 08:40 AM

Kris, your lovely--yet spine-tingling!--story, is further proof of the power of souls to communicate with us. By the writing of your story, you may have helped some reader feel closer to a lost loved one.

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2003-10-04 08:44 AM

Ooops-a-daisy! Kris, I forgot to save it!.............

There, we go! Mission accomplished!

loveya!
Linda

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

7 posted 2003-10-04 09:01 AM

Kris, this is really beautiful...
(even if it did make me have cold chills)

Hugs

Ethel

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-10-04 09:04 AM

Hauntingly beautiful!
I'd say challenge well met!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

9 posted 2003-10-04 10:28 AM

Thank you all ever so muchly...I was feeling really weird lastnight...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

10 posted 2003-10-04 01:31 PM

*sigh*

this is beautiful...

"funny
how
time really doesn't play a factor
when it comes to love..."

with family, indeed, time doesn't play a factor...

again

Life isn't really all that bad... just don't take it too seriously
"Poets have been mysteriously silent on the subject of cheese. "
--G. K.Chesterto

Duncan
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since 2001-08-07

Posts 5455

11 posted 2003-10-04 01:44 PM

"an angel's voice
bridging the space
between
heaven and my heart"

Such a comforting image this verse brought to mind. I sure miss my grandparents too. Thanks for the nice memory's this evoked Kristen.

Ringo

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since 2003-02-20

Posts 3684
Saluting with misty eyes

12 posted 2003-10-04 02:50 PM

OMG!!!! You have completely outdone yourself with this one...
You have arrived in the world of world-class poets. Congrats.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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