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Tiersdin
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since 2000-11-17
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east coast

0 posted 2003-10-03 07:59 PM



Once upon a time
we did mesh
bound as we were
through threads of
longing & empathy

It began with one link
Then a network-
A history of little things
rusted & new

Together we weaved
fragility along a seemingly
fortified foundation
back then we danced
between the twins with
no safeties...

Many thought me insane
& you, crazy

In all reality
we were both
just

wired...


~Tiersdin
9/03

[This message has been edited by Tiersdin (10-03-2003 08:00 PM).]

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rkcraig
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since 2003-02-27
Posts 202
Cincinnati, Ohio, USA
1 posted 2003-10-03 08:09 PM


really enjoyed the opening of the poem
Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
2 posted 2003-10-03 08:09 PM


wonderfully wired, I'd say... and taut as a bow.
Keth

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Duncan
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since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455

3 posted 2003-10-03 09:26 PM


"Many thought me insane
& you, crazy

In all reality
we were both
just

wired..."

Damn I like that.  Hi Tier...

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4 posted 2003-10-03 09:33 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh R.T, you just have a wonderful way of expressing yourself, sweet friend, we all feel wired ever so often and there's no shame in admitting that in the sake of finding ourselves deeper, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet R.T, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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