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inkedgoddess
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0 posted 2003-10-03 07:15 PM




Summer's trophies,
beautifying autumn's garage sales,

falling silently,
between dreams and dawn's calling,

reddening the anemic grass,

reigning beneath
the fall's colored umbrella.


© Copyright 2003 inkedgoddess - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2003-10-03 07:20 PM


stunning images, simply stunning!
Kethry

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Enchantress
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2 posted 2003-10-03 07:22 PM


Wonderful imagery Michele...Much enjoyed!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

littlewing
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3 posted 2003-10-03 10:14 PM


Michele,
I see you beneath that tree, you know
a kaliedoscope falling about you
*smile*
what a beautiful picture that would be
as you have penned here
xxoo

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4 posted 2003-10-03 10:17 PM


this is really very lovely...


Greeneyes~

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One that I've tried to write over and over again

Bill Charles
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5 posted 2003-10-03 10:19 PM


Michele - telling write, as you do...

BC

QjQ
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6 posted 2003-10-03 10:23 PM


absolutly a good write,,,

                                                                    

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7 posted 2003-10-03 10:46 PM






(smiles) Oh Michele, this is beautiful, sweet friend, autumn brings us many healthy harvests and apple cider is perfect for this occasion, yay! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Michele, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

vlraynes
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8 posted 2003-10-04 01:06 AM



This is beautiful, Michele...
Quite a lovely picture you've painted here,
with just a few well chosen words.
Wonderfully done.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-10-04 01:22 AM


Michele, this is a beutiful poem.
I really enjoyed reading it. I
love the Autumn season.
Hugs  
Ethel

bklynboy
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10 posted 2003-10-04 01:19 PM


very nice enjoy poem!
Ringo
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Saluting with misty eyes
11 posted 2003-10-04 03:45 PM


This is very nicely written...
I have memories of myself and a girlfriend in the Senandoah Valley of Virginia sitting underneath the apple tree in her yard just watching Autumn happen.
Truly enjoyed...

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

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