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kaleanna
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since 2003-08-18
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0 posted 2003-10-03 06:13 PM


simple things

Simple things make a love worthwhile
things as simple as holding hands or even a smile

simple things such as a kiss, a hug or a cuddle
can make life a little brighter and on your face, put a smile

a few sweet words whispered in the ear
a loved one holding you near

just a little touch, a sweet glance
can mean the world, just give it a chance

love that doesnt have the simple things dont usually last
so take these words to heart, start by leaving behind the past

remember to alway add the simple things if you want a love that lasts
a touch, holding hands, a sweet kiss, a sweet gentle glance

words soft and sweet, will help to make a love complete
dont forget that by adding the simple things you will have a love so sweet.

written oct 3, 2003

© Copyright 2003 M. Robin - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2003-10-03 06:57 PM


it's true for me, the little things seal the relationship

*s
M

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2003-10-04 02:29 AM


Love is little things tied together inside a big heart!

Little things remembered, shared, bought...
said...

Little things make a lifetime of memories!

I feel the same, enjoyed your true words on love!
~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

vlraynes
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since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
3 posted 2003-10-04 02:41 AM



So true...the simple things are surely important...

And this reminded me of a favorite quote...

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"It's not love's going hurts my days,
But that it went in little ways."
- - - Edna St. Vincent Millay
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Nicely done, kaleanna.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

n2dmystic
Member
since 2003-09-27
Posts 253
beyond the doors of perception
4 posted 2003-10-04 03:06 AM


very nice, indeed. yes, love is... ful of wonder and awe, or not there at all

Peace, Joe
in the big MT
seeking the serendipitous magical mysteries of life's ubiquitous twisteries

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