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Lovers In Wait |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Silver and gold, precious to hold both of a sparkling hue. Rose of the red, tickles the nose, as does the lilac blue. Treasures are held beneath the sea, beneath the brine and foam. Finest of jewels, ever sparkling away from pirate’s roam. Shining bars beneath glinting stars in pale of moon in bloom. Mercury, Earth, Venus and Mars entrapped by a comet’s plume. Lovers in wait their chosen fate upon the sands of time. Hands upon the latch of the gate whispering songs of rhyme. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"Lovers in wait their chosen fate upon the sands of time. Hands upon the latch of the gate whispering songs of rhyme." Beautiful Barry...very much enjoyed. ~Smiles, Hugs & Sighs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Barry~ I love it! So hopeful... Susan |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, this made me smile as you always bring back the true ideals of love and humanities of love from the dead and bring hope for loves classical revival! (big hugggssssss) This is more than silver and gold, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Lovers in wait their chosen fate upon the sands of time. Hands upon the latch of the gate whispering songs of rhyme. the last line says it all,, terrific write,,, |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
Very nice to read.  Love, Terri~  Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
I love this, Barry... I am very much enjoying the beauty that is springing from your pen of late.  Just wonderful, my friend...  When the power of love overcomes the |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Lovers in wait their chosen fate upon the sands of time. Hands upon the latch of the gate whispering songs of rhyme." Made me smile Barry. The thought, if not the reality.  |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lovers in wait their chosen fate upon the sands of time. Hands upon the latch of the gate whispering songs of rhyme. Oh my goodness, this is beautiful, Barry. I love the way you wrote each verse and the rhyme. It's so pretty!! Hugs Ethel |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Barry, I adore this . . . reminded me of mystery beneath the sea Lovers in wait their chosen fate upon the sands of time. beautiful writing *smile* xxoo |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Treasures are held beneath the sea, beneath the brine and foam. Finest of jewels, ever sparkling away from pirate’s roam. He who seeks shall find, I'm convinced! As always, a nice read from you Barry~ |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
A wondrous write.Your heart is always felt within your words. Crystal |
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