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Making Love in the Tall Rain Grass
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Making Love in the Tall Rain Grass |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Making Love in the Tall Rain Grass Down in the tall grass Under the inquisitive sky Night delivers A song in a jewel It isn’t glass no But real Be careful of it Crushed by mighty light Tenuous touching on the edges of a dream I hold it still in lover's lullaby For it won’t last until tonight |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
delicate indeed.... love this one Martie.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Lovely dear Martie.... Read like a whisper...much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Passionate, well said. Jason |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
This is very beautiful Martie I feel a lingering sadness in the tall rain grass. hugs you Maree   fate is not just |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggssssssss) Oh Martie, this is beautiful but a bit sad, sweet friend, wish for loves lullabye to forever comfortably bring you to sleep at night but also shine during the day for you, yay! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous and heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Martie, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You've been crystal gazing again... you do it so very well...  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Oh, what a gorgeous and gentle love song.....I could just read it again and again...I already have, in fact, and I'm about to go back for more. This is one I keep for a long, long time. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
this was so beautiful...your writing is as gentle as your heart. take care amy "love is like a butterfly-- |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Down in the tall grass Under the inquisitive sky Night delivers A song in a jewel no matter what you write, your words are always beautiful, Martie thank you for allowing my eyes to see through your words hugss Maureen |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Martie: I see a lover, rainfall, reverie your song . . . pristine honored . . . longing passion bitter beauty You are amazing xxoo |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Can not say it like you but it's raining here too yahoo! and so refreshing, just as your write |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie, my friend...it should rain there more often...this is beautiful. Hugs to you,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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James_A_Fraser Senior Member
since 2003-09-03
Posts 972Out Making Anticlines |
Here it is. Right here. The poem of the day. No need to read any other. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This is wonderful! Almost like being there. *smile* |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Smiling with icebox and everyone else. Yet another beauty, Martie! Ed... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Gentle, delicate... absolutely gorgeous. *S* |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Martie, YOU, are a song in a jewel! Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (10-08-2003 05:18 AM).] |
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dingusjr Member
since 2003-09-24
Posts 415Missouri |
Sounds like fun to me! Larry |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hugs and well wishes, hiya Martie, lovely verse,,,,very much enjoyed. |
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EvocativeVerse2 Senior Member
since 2003-09-10
Posts 1279 |
Excellent imagery Martie. You seem to be able to bring to life your thoughts ever so well. Bravo! Keep it up! Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MartieSis~ WORTH the wait - 'Night delivers A song in a jewel It isn’t glass no But real' You sing the rain so beautifully~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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dertah Senior Member
since 2003-06-18
Posts 584 |
what life would be without.... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Martie - this is a great one - well all of yours are great but I really liked how this ine touches so softly yet deeply - Paul |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Imagery so real my backside is itching. LOL, sorry. A beautiful, soft, sensuous write Martie. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
You certainly knew how to find a very catching title for this piece of art. Very tender, very tender... Thanx Dear One... |
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