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The Secrets (another oldie)
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The Secrets (another oldie) |
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KoKo Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995Inside the shadow's shadow |
"The Secrets" Jan 6th 2003 I know what holds you back And what pushes you to the end. I know what traits you lack And what makes you twist and bend. I know the secrets that you keep And the desires that you hide. I know what good you reap And the division of your pride. I know the way you hide Inside your sullen space And I know why you decide Every moment of your days. I know more than you can guess And I know you think I'm wrong. I know more than you express And I know you'll always be strong. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I love this reflective nature you've got going on.  Lovely. |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
I think you know them better than they know themselves.And this is great writing. Jason |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
It's great when you know somebody from the inside out |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Secrets just won't get you nowhere as someone can always read the eyes and wrinkles, sweet friend, you speak of this sense ever so well! (kiss on cheek) I love it, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lauren, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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