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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-10-03 03:35 PM



Roll The Credits

he said

I was
way too flawed
just a basket case

I cried at first

then I watched him
with dirt
under his nails
and egg
on his face

and inside
I laughed

I knew
he was right

I was
way
too flawed
for
him

"wish your room had room for two" John Mayer

© Copyright 2003 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-03 03:36 PM


For him, maybe..but not for me..
Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-10-03 04:15 PM


in a moment of gutter thoughts.. pictures Meg and helen..passes out
1slick_lady
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3 posted 2003-10-03 04:20 PM


lol r...1 2 3 floor
roflmao
you are just too funny......
just made my day

and now...i must put on my uniform and work allllll week end
she exits with shiny black boots into the sunset..... thinking how she hates the vampire shift..as she drives to work....is there a full moon...i HOPE not...and the only good news is i go back to day shift starting oct 13th !!! giggle



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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-10-03 04:45 PM


Exactly what Raph said...

Jason

icebox
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5 posted 2003-10-03 05:10 PM


I dunno, he sounds like the ideal Romeo to me!  *LAUGH*

Great imagery.

Oh, it is not quite first quarter moon, the real wackos are sleeping.  *grin*

Go get 'em tiger, but be careful out there.

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6 posted 2003-10-03 07:26 PM


... You're better off without him...


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7 posted 2003-10-03 10:32 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Hey, that's great, let's get one more for covering! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, I love the confidence here, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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8 posted 2003-10-04 12:05 PM


Flaws are the difference between drafting and art.....and you, rest assured, are no mannequin.

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vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-10-04 12:09 PM



"I cried at first

then I watched him
with dirt
under his nails
and egg
on his face

and inside
I laughed"



Yes...*smile*...love this Helen.

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-10-04 12:18 PM


This made me remember something...

Thank you for reminding me.

Susan

Bec
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11 posted 2003-10-04 03:26 AM


Sometimes there's nothing you can do but laugh and move on. Thank you for reminding me of that.

B

"I'm not crazy I'm just a little unwell"~ Matchbox 20

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12 posted 2003-10-04 02:07 PM


smileing...and laughing at the rest of them

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

littlewing
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13 posted 2003-10-04 02:33 PM


flawed like a diamond . . .

*smile*
I adore this
Helen, making me smile this afternoon
much needed
thank you
xxoo

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14 posted 2003-10-04 02:43 PM


Helen- Have people been showing you my picture again??? No... seriously, this is a great write... as if we expected anything else from you. Your track record speaks for itself.

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

alisa
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15 posted 2003-10-04 03:27 PM


like some have said, you are better without him...
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