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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-10-03 03:04 PM



This is the end of
my sinful longing for you
I have you here, now.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2003-10-03 03:05 PM



Yes, you were indeed,
inspired...

Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-10-03 03:07 PM


Congratulations Member Elite!!!!!


pandonov
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3 posted 2003-10-03 03:32 PM


inspiration is a wonder land, you seem to dwell there.
bsquirrel
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4 posted 2003-10-03 03:46 PM


I read this on two levels. How succinct of me. Isn't it just, though? (<--17 syllables)

[This message has been edited by bsquirrel (10-03-2003 03:47 PM).]

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5 posted 2003-10-03 03:56 PM


who....who inspired this? I must know....

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-10-03 04:08 PM


Beautiful Meghan!
Congratulations Member Elite!!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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7 posted 2003-10-03 04:11 PM


ooh...member elite

And the angel said unto me, "These are the cries of the carrots, the cries of the carrots!"
-Tool

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8 posted 2003-10-03 04:11 PM


sin is fun though ..grins..awesome megs
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9 posted 2003-10-03 04:32 PM


Inspired? indeed!

Verrrry nice.

oh and Congrats...Member Elite

Maree

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whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


Jason Lyle
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10 posted 2003-10-03 04:36 PM


very cool, and congrats.

Jason

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11 posted 2003-10-03 05:53 PM


Congrats
vandana
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12 posted 2003-10-03 06:30 PM


nice
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13 posted 2003-10-03 06:50 PM


woah. i too see this in two seperate ways.

library!

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14 posted 2003-10-03 10:38 PM




(smiles) Oh Meghan, this is just passionately witty, sweet friend, yay, longing go bye-bye! (big hugggsssss) May true happiness always fill your heart, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

[This message has been edited by Mistletoe Angel (10-03-2003 10:38 PM).]

vlraynes
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15 posted 2003-10-03 10:41 PM



Ah yes...well done, Meghan.
Beautifully inspired, indeed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

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16 posted 2003-10-03 11:11 PM


terrific!!!!!!!!!!!!!

                                                                    

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17 posted 2003-10-03 11:27 PM


Comfortably brilliant.
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