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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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The air started out brisk, a walk replacing a ride my own treads needing a workout selftalking, a great conversationalist even when alone. I question my fears, but smile as I remember that last kiss and the warmth that flowed even moments after, and after and after... I saw no one in my view, just pleasant thoughts and sun's warmth to lead me, guide me to a destination of relaxation. Of course a stopover and a "cool one" aided the mind to taste only the blessings that are in my life, those whom mean much to me, those whom I wish to mean more and those who coddle me when needed. No, I saw no one to speak of, no one to speak to, but the air whispered its softness, and your suggestion was not lost on me. Thank you, Ron M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Very nice!! |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Now, I'm begining to remember.. "I question my fears, but smile as I remember that last kiss and the warmth that flowed even moments after, and after and after..." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you Susan..this was for Cpat Ron who wanted something "lighter" I think. not sure I succeeded but the day is half over and for that I am grateful.  Kaoru, I don't think anyone can kiss as well as that one I continue to feel. And that memory deserves a thank you, also. Maybe I need to be kissed more often.  [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (10-03-2003 03:06 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
as always i enjoy reading your penning,,, |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Ah..now M... tell me. Did the chance you took and the view you saw, not lighten the load you felt? Is it not good, to step utside the self at least once in a while and revel in the pure decadent extravagance of a smile? well done my friend.. well done indeed! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
thank you again, Glenn for your attention... and yes, Good Dr. Ron (wasn't that interlopers job back when) you gave me the correct prescription, although I may be a little too loose with my thoughts at the moment..but it is funny how my typing has improved..what gives ?? |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(laughing) too loose with your thoughts??? I didn't know that was a possibility... I certainly hadn't noticed... as for the typing... you are more relaxed... why wouldn't you type better? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
see I made you laugh, you gave me a bit of the lighter side of life today.. thanks |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
well.. capture that lighter side and tomorrow... go to town and watch people shop... have some coffee or tea and just sit and listen, then tell the stories of what you saw, but of course with a license to make them yours not theirs... all sorts of courage out there, all sorts of love and acceptance..some simple some complexly woven into a lifetime of just coping.. tell their stories my friend...and in the process you'll tell your own. |
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rkcraig Member
since 2003-02-27
Posts 202Cincinnati, Ohio, USA |
love it - I find myself doing this a lot when the weather gets colder. I always take long walks by myself, just to be alone with my thoughts The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love another. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice read  |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
"Why Not?" That, good lady, is the most enabling question in the English language! ...as you well know, eh? ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Lisann Member
since 2001-01-31
Posts 350 |
nicely done. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...smiling here...because it's good to see YOU smiling, Maureen...just what the doctor ordered... Thanks for sharing the smile... Hugs to you, my friend,  ~Vicky When the power of love overcomes the |
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