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Madame Butterfly...(My own Challenge..finally)
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Madame Butterfly...(My own Challenge..finally) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow 
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Touch the crimson blade, oh love. I see the withered hair hanging as moss on tree. Must the eye slant so beautifully, oh tender touch of sight.. How often is a tragedy accepted.. in the midst of things, they are rarely a bit of beauty. But here, here you have the tears drowning the audience. Even if it is only of one, touch me silently grasping.. the warmth of sadness. Scream your pain oh, love is your lung in vain? The blood flows, never ceasing to grow as moss upon the trees.. How ever you have to remind me.. Of the suffering in song. Enlighten my senses, the skin of my own will rise in the wind. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
Challenge well penned,, enjoyed reading,,, |
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pandonov Member
since 2003-10-03
Posts 478b/w conscience and insolence |
"the warmth of sadness" indeed Kaoru, that is what makes poetry beautiful, and yours is. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
How often is a tragedy accepted.. in the midst of things, they are rarely a bit of beauty. ~*~ Well done, Meghan... |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Holy crap...I don't know how you do it.. Susan (I noticed your post number..now I am watching!!!) |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Seems we're both getting rather close, Susan.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
I simply bow.. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful!!! ~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~ |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Ohhhhhhh that baby always makes me miss Alley McBeal...dang...(is that how it was spelled?) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You almost made me cry over the description of hair.... Your talent is ungodly. Demonic, perhaps.  |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I'd say demonic..is the way to go. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you ooze poetry..no that sounds gross..it flows from you..better? Seriously genius |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I am absolutely amazed with your work. There is really one other that writes as you, but is older and more seasoned and I never miss one of Martie's poems, but I have now added you to my daily dose. Exceptional work, and you picked an exceptionally brilliant song to do as well. I take my hat off to you young lady poet, you are exceptionally good! |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Meghan, this is absolutely beautiful, sweet friend, I knew you would come and make one special display of your own challenge and you did on monarc wings, yay! (smiles) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Meghan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
yea, ditto to raffi |
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