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pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence

0 posted 2003-10-03 02:18 PM


Words mending my loneliness
coming out from another being.
I hear, listen.
Black wine darning my ashen lips,
and I need a mirror to believe.
It is.
Something warm intrudes searching for the free.
Carried on disguised,
it seeps through time unnoticed,
weightlessly beautiful.
I feel paired to life
and the sound-moaners are leaving.
A found face (between lost and wasted)
likes the view where I belong to.
Come,
guide your curiosity
among me and my phases,
I'm prying, too.

You can stay as long as you want, or I.


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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-03 02:24 PM


"Black wine darning my ashen lips,
and I need a mirror to believe.
It is.
Something warm intrudes searching for the free.
Carried on disguised,
it seeps through time unnoticed,
weightlessly beautiful.
I feel paired to life
and the sound-moaners are leaving."

Wonderful lines there, and throughout the whole thing.

I'm diggin' this.

pandonov
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since 2003-10-03
Posts 478
b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2003-10-03 03:10 PM


thanx kaoru
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
3 posted 2003-10-03 07:08 PM


another wonderful write..with many great lines

I am welcoming you again

M

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