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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2003-10-03 10:19 AM



Just Surviving


I wonder if I can survive the frost of the morning,
outwear the tiredness that both precedes
and follows me, sharing my bed,
the voice that tears into my soul
reminding me of...

and that is where it stops
nothing follows the of,
the mind cancels its program
and I go on with my artificial sleep.

M


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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1 posted 2003-10-03 10:26 AM


Morning M....

I'm sure you will survive... but today, I'd like to see your heart revel in the beauty around you... so, do something for yourself... take a walk and look around..go ist and watch people and make up stories about them.. step outside yourself and see the world as you know how...and write it for us to see through your eyes..

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-10-03 10:33 AM


are you trying to inspire me today

Thanks Ron.  This was actually the result of two words I read this morning, and how tired I actually am feeling. You know that feeling that tells you the tired is a collection and you wonder why it doesn't get relieved by resting? That kind of tired...so I shall push a little harder today (and it is quite chilly here) and will do a bit of gardening to warm up...then maybe take a walk or better still a bike ride along the trail. I am not too sure if I will run into anyone...but I will view nature.


M

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