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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2003-10-03 10:03 AM






~*~Canvas Of Sky~*~

  


~
Sunrise of morning
Beautiful canvas of sky
Perfect masterpiece~
~
Fall hues prevailing
Sighing songs rising on breeze
Autumnal Glory~
~
Majestical views
Partaking of this moment
Yes, Earth Mother smiles ~
~



It's better than I could have planned..
it's made me who I am...
{Trace Adkins}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (10-03-2003 10:12 AM).]

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1 posted 2003-10-03 10:05 AM


the beauty you captured, you captured well...

nicely done my friend..


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2 posted 2003-10-03 10:05 AM



Oh yes, she smiles...on earth, on us, on you...

I can name on two hands the number of poets who will love this one, Donna...

What a beautiful wake-up call to the weekend.  Thank you!

Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-10-03 10:21 AM


Donna~

Very nice appreciation...

Susan

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4 posted 2003-10-03 10:24 AM


I didn't get to see it except on TV but the sunrise was a beauty this morning.

Lovely write, Donna

hugs
M

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5 posted 2003-10-03 10:26 AM


Donna Dear, this is indeed the perfect masterpiece of autumnal glory!--and your gentle spirit shines through it all...

Lovely beyond lovely...

Love & Eternal Light,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-10-03 10:36 AM


Oh my...oh my!!
How beautiful Donna
both in words and picture...
Stunning!!  Simply stunning!
~Heart Hugs, Nancy~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

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7 posted 2003-10-03 11:06 AM


GentleSpirit~
Where was I ????

This is BEAUTIFUL~
Thank you sooooooooooooooo much for sending it to me~

Breathtaking~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
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8 posted 2003-10-03 11:07 AM


lovely.....as you always do....


ME~

There's a song inside  my soul
One that I've tried to write over and over again

passing shadows
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9 posted 2003-10-03 12:26 PM


in awe at the beauty
littlewing
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10 posted 2003-10-03 02:02 PM


Donna

she sure does
and upon you, Oh My yes
a beauty . . .
*smile*
xxoo

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11 posted 2003-10-03 02:51 PM


Have I ever told you guys how much I love haiku?

It's so..great.

Thanks for this, it's going in my library.

Patricia
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12 posted 2003-10-03 03:59 PM


How beautiful.  Thank you for this peaceful and serene feeling you have provided to such a stressful week. And what a lovely way to begin the weekend.

Patricia  

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13 posted 2003-10-03 04:04 PM


Earth Mother and the rest of us.

Beautiful and serene GS.

Maree

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14 posted 2003-10-03 04:55 PM






(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is spellbinding, sweet friend, and may Mother Nature always rejuvenate us each morning and at twilight with her relaxing spells of magic! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Donna, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Martie
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15 posted 2003-10-03 05:00 PM


Donna....three beautifuls!! and you are too!
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16 posted 2003-10-03 10:54 PM


How very beautiful! (And I'm thanking Sunshine for linking me to this one.)

Thanks Donna, for the beautiful canvas. You know, this is one of my favorite poetic forms.

vandana
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17 posted 2003-10-04 12:24 PM


beautiful
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18 posted 2003-10-04 12:34 PM


Gentle Spirit


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