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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
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0 posted 2003-10-03 08:38 AM


Busy movements, oh how our world’s logic works
Morning’s wing through every crevice taking gestures
Transfixing in depth, walking through the eyes of fundamentals
Sometimes intentional, sometimes by mere reflex essentual
Sometimes….blurred, in plump spaces of azure oceans curtseying
Like a handsome pretence, charming weather flutters about
Into the hearts of early morning, under her sheltering shawl
Of crystal blue winged seas, mutually we talked
With utmost openness, bubbling desires began to unlock

Arcs of penmanship, tossing fonts, glowing like a new silvery moon
Ribbons of miasma, settling outside our curious window
Whispering secrets to each other, all preciously snug, within the growth of afternoons
It was a familiar, delicious tingle of contentment; we flew within a mysterious affluence
Developing interests, swooning overflowing currency of watercolors
You “had” my attention, pointing out that Grande Piano of Virginia's Godess
We were travelers together dining on God’s mind…a soft and lovely starry mantra
You were not a common site, but a deep refection of immense wings which soared
Above the rulers of humanity, but you were gone through each and every morn

Now I dimly register evenings and its promises, in reminiscence,
Proverbial watercourse communes an ambiguous journals balance
You found a new spot within your crowned feminine seaway
With a slow beat, I sank to my knees, counting the welts of wordplay

But…as in life, for awhile the air reached it‘s peak of color…of that I’ll never regret
Twilight rose in purpose, interpretations of a profound spiritual rosette
All illuminations within a vast persuasive sea had fallen to gold
Where our eyes met evenly, our expressions seemed to creatively unfold`

Now I skip delicately barefoot, extraordinarily primed across the sands
Expressionless, from that small wind, and your eccentric musing hands
The look of illustrations serves me perfectly, from a flaming spiral stairway
With eagerness to build a bridge, no longer arguing any premise
Following life to the ridge of an artful map, fervent and unafraid
Wide intervals stand, by my side, in a ringed pastureland of golden braids
Yes, love, I stumbled, but…as in every end, beginnings flute embracing enthusiasm
Nothing but free verse lay ahead, and because of you… I compose
The power of creation within hopeful poems
Fully human and pushing out, sloughing, emerging, continually transcending



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littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-10-03 09:32 AM


God Lee . . .
you are speaking to me this morning
in so many ways
you may not even perceive
there is so much here
yet again:

Like a handsome pretence, charming weather flutters about
Into the hearts of early morning, under her sheltering shawl
Of crystal blue winged seas, mutually we talked
With utmost openness, bubbling desires began to unlock

We were travelers together dining on God’s mind…a soft and lovely starry mantra
You were not a common site, but a deep refection of immense wings which soared

Nothing but free verse lay ahead, and because of you… I compose
The power of creation

all of this Lee
all of it . . .
pure beauty
xxoo

Kaoru
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2 posted 2003-10-03 02:29 PM


Always a treat to read you, you know?
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