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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-10-03 07:51 AM


In a jet of air above a spraying nozzle
Rides my soul caught in a balance
Blowing me to a gravitational pull
Where my counterpart is vernacular
Finding expression dancing within
All controlling and determinative
There this source that gives rise to me
Where all things become probability
Inner relationship begins anew
Simultaneous corrective moves
Every step of consideration
Dances within a spiritual relation
Appropriate truth of the inner self
Completes the soul and mind to wealth
Where powers move combining poles
Bringing music into parables
So light the light with strong desire
Clearly viewing all the stars
Which is of course an inner liaison
Viewing the intensity of your spiritual lantern

I am a law within myself, enhancing all cosmic arrangements
I glimpse the drenching view insuring nature
Profound comprehension of stalwart adherence
A language of the undemanding life leaves itself wide open for neglect,
By those who want sustaining belief for living it,
Who reject to change their nature of dialect


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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
1 posted 2003-10-03 10:55 AM


Bringing music into parables
So light the light with strong desire
Clearly viewing all the stars
Which is of course an inner liaison
Viewing the intensity of your spiritual lantern

so much here to take in, basically its all about connecting if only on a clouds prayer
very consuming write nice work

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-10-03 10:59 AM


Lee,
I am a law within myself, enhancing all cosmic arrangements
I glimpse the drenching view insuring nature
Well done, enjoyed.

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