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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-10-03 07:17 AM




Feelings Deeply Affected

You were my storyteller
Always my motivation
I wrote about you often
You being my inspiration

Woven in togetherness
Dreams we had spun
When we kept in touch
    We both shared in the fun  

Thinking of those times
I have often reflected
The thoughts I still have
Feelings deeply affected

Your thoughts from afar
Sent with loving touch
Forevemore promising
You would keep in touch

Getting over the silence
I have not progressed
Forever remembering
Loving words expressed

Hope2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-10-03 07:24 AM


beautiful thoughts and lovely write.
Susan Caldwell
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2 posted 2003-10-03 11:33 AM


"Your thoughts from afar
Sent with loving touch
Forevemore promising
You would keep in touch"


I very recently became aquainted with this promise...

Enjoyed!

Susan

Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2003-10-03 11:38 AM


HopeS
Lovely write.

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-10-03 11:39 AM


Thank you Lee for your kind reply

Hope

HopeS
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5 posted 2003-10-03 11:42 AM


Thank you Susan and whoever you became aquainted with , I do hope they keep their promise

Hope

HopeS
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6 posted 2003-10-03 11:43 AM


Thank you Seymour , you are so sweet

Hope

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7 posted 2003-10-03 12:18 PM


Hope, please let go and move on...it's not worth it anymore

you have so much to give...and so much to live

love ya

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8 posted 2003-10-03 11:07 PM




(smiles) Oh Hope, this is beautiful, sweet friend, silence is never pretty but serenity with memories can truly be special! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

QjQ
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9 posted 2003-10-03 11:13 PM


very nice   Hope,,,


enjoyed ,,,

                                                                    

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