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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-10-03 04:19 AM


Suffer My Heart

It breaks my heart
to find me and her
so far apart.
I miss her tenderness.
I miss the thrill of
her passionate kiss.
Without her I  must go on,
a broken heart, my choices
my desires all but gone.
Live my life the best I can.
Suffer my heart to understand.

JamesLee
October02
2003

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-10-03 06:23 AM


you expressed this very well,,,,

                                                                    

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-10-03 06:26 AM


James,
A sad write, but well expressed.

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-10-03 07:28 AM


very bittersweet, and yet a hint of understanding and awareness, something unfortunately we all must face in life, the realization of ourselves, thoughts, words and deeds.
Thank you for sharing

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-10-03 08:39 AM


James you have just inspired me

Suffer my heart to understand.

God, what a bittersweet line . . .

the heart doesnt though, does it?
not right away , maybe never
it just kind of forgets
(cardiac amnesia)
*smile*
Beautiful writing
xxoo

SharaRose
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5 posted 2003-10-03 09:51 AM


Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 2003-10-03 09:56 AM


James~

I don't get it either...understanding is unreachable it seems at times.  

Nicely done..

Susan

Marge Tindal
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7 posted 2003-10-03 10:36 AM


JamesMichael~
You write the ache so tenderly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost,
the spirit rejoices over what it has left.
- Sufi epigram
   noles1@totcon.com     

Paula Finn
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8 posted 2003-10-03 11:09 AM


I know the feeling
Enchantress
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9 posted 2003-10-03 11:21 AM


Bittersweet ache James..
Well said...well said indeed.
~Hugs~

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

vandana
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10 posted 2003-10-03 06:32 PM


enjoyed
nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2003-10-03 07:14 PM


Suffer my heart to understand.


so you are the one to inspire lw...

a wonderful last line, JamesM

hugss
M

PsychoticBunni
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12 posted 2003-10-03 07:33 PM


it really expresses your feelings but i think that there could be more to it. But hey it's ur poem so take my advice if u wnat but if u don't don't
Kethry
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13 posted 2003-10-03 07:44 PM


Wonderful inspire, and cardiac amnesia...couldn't we all use some?
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



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14 posted 2003-10-03 10:29 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh James, my heart goes out to you, sweet friend, you have suffered way too much and I trul mean it when I say you will find all your heart desires as woen who truly know what love is could not ask for anything more than a golden heart like yours! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

A Romantic Heart
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15 posted 2003-10-04 02:20 AM


James~ Hope your heart heals with time!

very painful poem

reminds me of the "Lonely Hearts Club"

Thanks for your words~ARH

True poets don't write with the ink of quill or pen, but with the ink of their heart~

vlraynes
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16 posted 2003-10-04 02:25 AM



Ah...so this is where Sue found
her inspiration...and I can see why.  
You've penned the hurt beautifully, James.


And, Sue?...'cardiac amnesia'...
I love that...smile.

When the power of love overcomes the
love of power the world will know peace.
-Jimi Hendrix

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (10-04-2003 02:26 AM).]

ethome
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17 posted 2003-10-04 07:10 AM


James
A wonderful title and a wonderful write.
So well put!

Eric

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Paul Wilson
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18 posted 2003-10-04 09:31 AM


James...Enjoyed the tenderness and saddness in this well written poem...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

garysgirl
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19 posted 2003-10-04 09:39 AM


James, this is so sad. But I love
the beautiful way that you wrote it.
Hugs  
Ethel

allamericanjoe
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20 posted 2003-10-09 08:47 AM


Unfortunately, we don't choose love, love chooses us, and for us.

"The greatest gift a father can give to his daughter is to love her mother."

Earth Angel
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21 posted 2003-10-09 08:57 AM



I'm sorry that your heart is suffering, Dear James.

Loving hugs,
EA

angelblueyes
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22 posted 2003-10-09 10:11 AM


James this aches < but is written with only the tenderness that you can give it.May your hearet heal soon and flourish with the love it so deserves.
Crystal

arthur
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23 posted 2003-10-09 10:57 AM


so well expressed
arthur

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24 posted 2003-10-09 10:57 AM


James, this is so sad... I really love the last 2 lines...

"Live my life the best I can
Suffer my heart to understand"

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

Jason Lyle
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25 posted 2003-10-09 11:42 AM


A sad but truthful and wise write.

Jason

BluesSerenade
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26 posted 2003-10-09 11:51 AM


Carry on we must!  

I think you speak for many James.
Lovely heartbreaker of a poem you wrote.

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