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Ku'uipo
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0 posted 2003-10-03 03:28 AM



i let myself fall
everyday finding something,
finding someone who makes me less
i become what i hate
losing myself in the shambles of the day

i lie alongside of the debacle of society
discovering myself amidst all that is depraved and perverse

i live and die by status sway
judging sufficiency by ancharical dismay
i crave the esteem i once exalted
desire sanity, desire pride
all that cunning minds have seized

'let me not to the marriage of true minds'
displace the undertows which search me out
emancipate me from the labyrinth
draw me from the storm
take me back to the place i belong

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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-10-03 03:36 AM


Awesome

pandonov
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b/w conscience and insolence
2 posted 2003-10-03 04:18 AM


a lot of pain my friend, and that makes it beautiful to read.
Susan Caldwell
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3 posted 2003-10-03 11:40 AM


Wow!  This was great...and I understand it well.

Susan

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4 posted 2003-10-03 11:23 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Ku'uipo, here  come with a thread and nail for you, now hold on and swing high over the hedgeslike Theseus did escaping his labyrinth! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I send angel healing hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Ku'uipo, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

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