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SharaRose
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Somewhere out there~

0 posted 2003-10-03 01:35 AM


~*I Sense You*~


I sense you,
on some midnight train.
Thinking of love,
wondering will you lose
your pain?
Not wringing your hands,
but still missing something.
My paths steps come near to you.
Somehow this place in time
was meant to be.
God knew since a little girl,
Well maybe it was I knew him.
He's always been ever present,
but now through pain I can't define.
Because it wasn't mine to bare.
I don't know where I am.
But I feel the fear,
with you near me,
will subside.
Somehow
I always wanted
a man to be my guide.
Read to me, tell me history
even if it seems to be trivial.
It never seems to be, to me.
Read me till I sleep,
But no fear on waking,
you'll be gone.
That's how
I will know
that midnight
train was the
way I was
supposed
to go.
Find my
shine
in
you,
and
you'll
think
that's
just
fine!




You will think of me, and know I want for you what is grand. Maybe? Just maybe, this is God's plan.

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

© Copyright 2003 Shara - All Rights Reserved
angelblueyes
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1 posted 2003-10-03 01:50 AM


This is Gods plan and the sense you feel is returned.You will share this wonderful plan and flourish together.
Crystal

SharaRose
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2 posted 2003-10-03 01:56 AM


Hugging you... Thanks for that. I needed to hear those words. But I do believe.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-10-08 12:21 PM


Terri, I really like this poem.
It has a peaceful feeling to it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

SharaRose
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4 posted 2003-10-08 02:50 AM


Thank you Ethel...You are sweet. When I wrote this it was comforting.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-10-08 04:07 AM


expressions well penned,,,

                                                                       

SharaRose
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6 posted 2003-10-08 04:08 AM


Thank you Q. Bless ya bunches.
Love,
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Sunnyone
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7 posted 2003-10-08 04:31 AM


Beautiful, my friend, and I love the thought of there being a master plan when it comes to the loves in our lives!  Much enjoyed!!  ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart  ~S~

EvocativeVerse2
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8 posted 2003-10-08 08:56 AM


Very well out together Terri. I can see the thought that went into this one. It is quite peaceful in content and I needed that this morning. Thanks!

Remember, if you're not part of the future, you're history!

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-10-08 09:00 AM


SharaRose
Enjoyed the read.

Susan Caldwell
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10 posted 2003-10-08 09:23 AM


Shara~

Enjoyed this very much!!

Susan

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11 posted 2003-10-08 11:00 PM




(smiles) Oh Shara, this is lovely, sweet friend, if you wish someone happiness, that someone will do unto you too, as that is one true belief He lays before us all! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, I love this and am so happy to be back, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Terri, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

JamesMichael
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12 posted 2003-10-09 12:05 PM


Pretty nice...James
SharaRose
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13 posted 2003-10-10 11:46 PM


I am so sorry it took me so long to get a thank you to all of you. Hugs and Love to all.

Sunnyone--I don't what it is, but God has always been in the back of mind in all that I do as far back and I can remember. He was always there. It was me that wouldn't listen to Him for what He had planned for me and my life. I hate how cliche' that sounds, but it's just how I feel. Thanks for your words.

EvocativeVerse2--Thank you so much for this comment. This touched me because it touched your morning. Much appreciated your words!!

Seymour Tabin--Thank you so much Seymour. I appreciate your kind words.

Susan Caldwell--I am so glad you enjoyed. Much appreciated.

Noah--Ah, there you are Noah. You have been missed. Thank you for reading and the comment.

James Micheal-- I am glad you liked. Much appreciated.

and
Terri~

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

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