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Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300
MA, USA

0 posted 2003-10-03 12:33 PM





In moonlit magic,
velvet stars dot the sky...
crowns adorning your heart,
diamonds adorning mine.

The night hums us little white lies.
Old songs of secret caresses
crooning passion's timeless tunes
to the love we built on sighs.

Velvet dreams softly drape
across the midnight firmament
enveloping us in a starry foray,
in a dance as warm as a winter cape.

Into moonlit magic...we will fly.
Crushed-velvet love for us to touch,
timeless tunes of passions sung.
Crowns and diamonds sprinkled
like stars across our love-filled skies.


[This message has been edited by Ivy Rose (10-03-2003 12:34 AM).]

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angelblueyes
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since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
1 posted 2003-10-03 12:36 PM


This is beautiful,tender, and smooth.It reaches into the heart and pulls it into the moonlight.An awesome write.
Crystal

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2003-10-03 01:17 AM


The images in this are to dream of!

Just lovely~

Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175
VA
3 posted 2003-10-03 01:49 AM


*sigh* romantic...I'm feeling mushy tonight

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-10-03 03:59 AM


Very nice...James
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