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Open Poetry #29

It Was Only A Dream

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

0 posted 2003-10-02 09:13 PM

This poem actually isn't finished yet. Still looking
for the missing link in it yet.
- E.J.2003

You set my heart a fire
Fill my soul with desires
of sin.

Closing my eyes I can feel
the warmth of your touch
upon my skin as my heart
pounds with anticipation

Reaching out for you
I realized it was
only a dream.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-10-02 09:21 PM

gee i think it's pretty darn good as is,,

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

2 posted 2003-10-02 11:19 PM

(smiles) Oh E.J, this is lovely, sweet friend, I too love it as it is, maybe you can make two versions, your version ere and the one the way you are trying to shape it! (big hugggsssssss) God Bless You, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet E.J, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

I don't need no proof when it comes to God and truth
I can see the sun set and I perceive

***Live***

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member

since 2003-07-10

Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

3 posted 2003-10-02 11:46 PM

i think its good how it is...i like his idea go for two versions this and the one youre tryin to make it into

I feel rain pouring down. I wait to rot away,
Live again, here forever, the spiral never ends. Godsmack

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

4 posted 2003-10-02 11:58 PM

I think it's mighty good the way it is.

You always write with such heart.
Crystal

froggy
Senior Member

since 2003-06-23

Posts 1893
Michigan

5 posted 2003-10-03 02:49 PM

Thank-you all for the nice comments.
You gave me an idea Noah.

Hugs to each of you

:-)

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